Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Module 3 Reviews: Poetry



For this unit, I have selected Mirror, Mirror, Bookspeak!, and Diamond Willow. Mirror, Mirror will appeal to fairy tale lovers, and it will introduce you to a new form of poetry. Bookspeak! will call to anyone who loves books. Diamond Willow is a novel in verse, but not what people probably think of when they hear the word “poem.” It may be something a little outside the box for middle grade students who swear they don’t like poetry.

Here’s one I made up to get you started, haiku-style:

Read some poetry
Images wash over you
A new way to see

Happy reading!

MIRROR, MIRROR - Marilyn Singer



1. BIBLIOGRAPHY
Singer, Marilyn. 2010. Mirror, Mirror. Ill. by Josée Masse. New York: Dutton Children’s Books. ISBN 978-0-525-47901-7

2. PLOT SUMMARY
Mirror, Mirror is a collection of poems retelling fairy tales. Mirrors give reflections, and these poems are no exception. Marilyn Singer explains at the end of the book that she created a new poetic form she calls a reverso. Each spread in the book gives two poems about the same fairy tale. The two poems are the same with the lines written in reverse order. Reading the poem in on order gives a traditional interpretation of the fairy tale, reading the opposite order portrays a point of view not usually heard: how hard it is to be the prince, how unfair the ball is for the stepsisters, hope from the ugly duckling.

3. CRITICAL ANALYSIS
Fairy tales are popular, which gives great appeal to this collection. The fairy tales Singer has selected will be widely recognized by children. The success of these poems depends on children having an understanding of the original story to provide context, because the poems only give a glimpse into an essential scene or theme. If children are not well-versed in these fairy tales, it would be advantageous to become acquainted with them first. Reading the poems out loud makes a tremendous difference in hearing contrasts in phrasing, inflection, and tone of voice between the poems in the pair. Some pairs flow equally well in both directions, while others feel more contrived.

Singer’s poems are free verse. In most poems, the rhymes are incidental than following a set rhyme scheme. She does not incorporate onomatopoeias or repeated sounds. Their rhythm follows the natural cadence of speech instead of a predictable number of syllables or stress patterns. Lines are broken to allow grouping of lines into different sentences by changing the placement of punctuation. By changing how verses relate to each other, Singer pushes the reader to hear something new. Some phrases are set on their own to make them stand out. The differences in perspective between the paired poems can create distinct images with the same words. Part of the interest comes out of the juxtaposition of the poems. The unexpected point of view by itself may not have the same impact without the associated contrast. It is possible that she could have created poems with greater use of poetic elements or stronger emotional impact if she had not constrained herself to reverso poems. She added technical difficulty points for maintaining the form, but may have lost some artistic quality because of its inflexibility.

Each page is divided in half vertically, with one title for each pair of poems. Titles and first letters are set in a font with a fairy tale feel. The poems are printed in different color ink. The opposite page is a pair of illustrations that each represent one poem. The illustrations match up in the middle, and many have elements that cross over onto the opposite half, either as they are, as an opposite, or transformed into something different with the same outline. The split illustrations heighten the juxtaposition of the poems but also bring a unity to them. On one hand, they are so different, but on the other, they are so similar. Several of the illustrations accentuate the distinction by using cool colors on one side and warm colors on the other. The colors are bright, and fairy tale characters show their emotions: wistful, frightened, surprised.

Mirror, Mirror opens with a poem explaining that reading poems in reverse order will cause you to reexamine your preset notions about the stories, and concludes with a pair encouraging you to be willing to follow an unexpected path. Sometimes that’s where the magic is.

4. REVIEW EXCERPT(S) AND AWARDS
Publishers Weekly Best Children's Books: Picture Books, 2010
New York Public Library Children's Books, 2010
Language Arts notable poetry, 2010
Horn Book Fanfare, 2010
Booklist Editor's Choice: Books for Youth, 2010
ALA ALSC Notable Children's Books, 2011
Kirkus Best Children's Books, 2010
Texas Bluebonnet Book Award Nominee, 2012
H. W. Wilson Children’s Core Collection Most Highly Recommended level

Language Arts: “This collection is sure to please students young and old!”
Bulletin of the Center for Children's Books: “. . . the result is neatly, astonishingly clever  . . . Kids will want to try the form out, if only to find out how tough it really is, and the poems will make a worthy addition to discussions of viewpoint and folklore.”
School Library Journal: “This appealing collection based on fairy tales is a marvel to read . . . This is a remarkably clever and versatile book that would work in any poetry or fairy-tale unit. A must-have for any library.”
BookList: “This ingenious book of reversos . . . toys with and reinvents oh-so-familiar stories and characters, from Cinderella to the Ugly Duckling . . . Matching the cleverness of the text, Masse’s deep-hued paintings create split images that reflect the twisted meaning of the irreverently witty poems and brilliantly employ artistic elements of form and shape . . . A must-purchase that will have readers marveling over a visual and verbal feast.”
Kirkus: “A collection of masterful fairy-tale–inspired reversos . . . Masse's gorgeous, stylized illustrations enhance the themes of duality and perspective by presenting images and landscapes that morph in delightful ways from one side of the page to the other. A mesmerizing and seamless celebration of language, imagery and perspective.”

5. CONNECTIONS
-          Encourage students to make predictions about what will be contrasted in the poems by looking first at just the illustration or illustration and poem title.
-          Students can select a different fairy tale or different pairing to write poems from different points of view. If they want to increase the difficulty, they can try writing them in the reverso form.
-          Students can explore other poems of juxtaposition, like the antonym diamante, where the beginning of the poem shows one side, the middle line is a transition, and the end of the poem shows the opposite. For more information, visit http://www.poetry4kids.com/blog/lessons/how-to-write-a-diamante-poem/
-          Students can compare Mirror, Mirror to other poetry by Marilyn Singer to see if they see any similarities in style.
             Twosomes: Love Poems from the Animal Kingdom, ISBN 978-0375867101
            Every Day’s a Dog’s Day, ISBN 978-0803737150
            A Stick Is an Excellent Thing, ISBN 978-0547124933
            How to Cross a Pond: Poems About Water, ISBN 978-0375823763
First Food Fight This Fall and Other Poems About School, ISBN 978-1402741456
-          Explore other poetry with fairy tale themes:
Yolen, Jane, and  Dotlich, Rebecca Kai. Grumbles from the Forest: Fairy-Tale Voices with a Twist. ISBN 978-1590788677
And especially the 2013 sequel to Mirror, Mirror from Marilyn Singer and Josée Masse: Follow, Follow: A Book of Reverso Poems. ISBN 978-0-8037-3769-3

BOOKSPEAK! - Laura Purdie Salas



1. BIBLIOGRAPHY
Salas, Laura Purdie. 2011. BookSpeak! Poems About Books. Ill. by Josée Bisaillon. Boston, MA: Clarion Books. ISBN: 978-0-547-22300-1

2. PLOT SUMMARY
The first poem of BookSpeak! invites the reader to choose the adventure of reading over television or the computer. Most of the poems are personifications, written from the point of view of books, diaries, and different parts of the book, like covers and bookplates. The index even explains why it is more helpful than the table of contents. There is sibling rivalry between the beginning, the middle, and the ending. Find out about book care and the process of writing a book. Do you know what happens when everyone leaves the bookstore at night? These humorous poems will introduce the reader to the world of books from the inside out.

3. CRITICAL ANALYSIS
BookSpeak! offers a variety of different styles of poems, from opening with an invitation to read through the last poem, appropriately titled “The End.” Despite “Index” touting its usefulness, there is not one in this book. Composed to honor paper-bound books, these poems will engage readers as long as print meets page. The poems are playful and entice the reader into adventure. Concepts and vocabulary should be understandable to most elementary-aged students (second or third grade and up).

Most poems in the collection have a strong meter and predictable rhyme scheme like “Calling All Readers” (abab) or “Vacation Time!” (aabb). Some are imperfect rhymes (like tattoo and show in “Book Plate” or been and twin in “A Character Pleads for His Life”). In these cases, trying to force a true rhyme would have been less effective. “Top Secret” is an acrostic. “On the Shelf and Under the Bed” is free verse. In addition to rhymes, Salas includes alliteration and assonance in poems like “A Character Pleads for His Life” (“Surfer dude, scientist, sea turtle, twin” where S transitions to T), “Picture This” (“belle of the ball”), or “The End,” which has both alliteration and assonance (“sprint, skip, skim” and “smile, cry, sigh”).

Salas offers a number of unique images in her poems. The end of a book is compared to the finish line of a race, book plates to tattoos. Illustrators make “words bloom in your heart” (“This Is The Book”). There is a repeated image of stories being trapped in the books unless someone opens them to let them out. In “A Character Pleads for His Life,” the reader is invited to join the character in the freedom of the story. Because books are personified, they twist common phrases to fit their format, like “bite your page” instead of “bite your tongue” in “The Middle’s Lament: A Poem for Three Voices”

Visual elements are an important component in BookSpeak! The typesetting supports poems like “Cliffhanger.” Layout also adds to the repetitive form in “This Is the Book.” Some verses are set apart from the overall pattern of stanzas to highlight their meaning. Fonts are carefully selected to add interest to the poems while maintaining readability. The poem about a diary uses a handwriting-style font. The font used for the title of “Conflicted” is tangled. Josée Bisaillon’s mixed-media illustrations are carefully crafted to complement each poem. A portion of an index is used on the page for “Index”. The text used in the water for “Cliffhanger” has a washed-out appearance. Combining original illustration with collages of paper, books, and photos, Bisaillon adds visual art to the poetic.

4. REVIEW EXCERPT(S) AND AWARDS
Bank Street College of Education, Best Children's Books of the Year, 2012
NCTE Children’s Literature Assembly, Notable Children’s Books in the Language Arts, 2012
Gelett Burgess Center for Creative Expression Honor Book, 2011
White Ravens book, 2012
Nerdy Book Award, 2011
H. W. Wilson’s Children’s Core Collection – Core level recommendation

School Library Journal: “The poems are, by turns, philosophical, humorous, and even instructional . . .  Whimsical, mixed-media illustrations grace every page. Bisaillon skillfully incorporates the printed poems into the artwork so that the words and images have a single, unified, visual effect. This is an appealing offering that will be especially popular with librarians.”
BookList: “With its mix of poetic forms and wry twists on language-arts terms, this is a natural choice for sharing in classrooms and young writers’ workshops” (no final period on online version)
Children's Literature: “a spirited and lovely celebration of reading and its joys”
Amazon: “A collection of wacky, whimsical poems about books and all the treasures they contain…”

5. CONNECTIONS
-          Use in library lessons teaching the parts of a book, selecting poems relevant to the lesson. The poems can also be introduced with the song “A Book Has Two Covers” (see http://www.mommynature.com/documents/concepts-print-song.pdf for the tune and lyrics).
-          Write poems for topics not covered by Salas: for example, title page, spine, dust jacket, ISBN number, library barcode, or bookmarks. Use withdrawn library books for collage elements to add to digital clipart and children’s drawings to mimic Bisaillon’s illustrations.
-          Pair with nonfiction books about writing and publishing books.
Aliki. How a Book Is Made. ISBN 0-690-04498-4
Bial, Raymond. A Book Comes Together: From Idea to Library. ISBN 0-9718238-0-4
Christelow, Eileen. What Do Authors Do? ISBN 0-395-71124-X
Christelow, Eileen. What Do Illustrators Do? ISBN 978-0-618-87423-1
Fox, Kathleen. A Book Is Just Like You. ISBN 978-1-60213-060-9
Donovan, Sandy. Karl and Carolina Uncover the Parts of a Book. ISBN 978-1-40485760-5
Donovan, Sandy. Pingpong Perry Experiences How a Book Is Made. ISBN 978-1-40486106-0
Hayward, Linda. I Am a Book. ISBN 0-7613-2905-6
Marshall, Pam. From Idea to Book. ISBN 0-8225-1385-4
Royston, Angela. How Is a Book Made? ISBN 978-1-40346639-6
Rhatigan, Joe. In Print! 40 Cool Publishing Projects for Kids. ISBN 1-57990-359-2
-          Compare this collection of poems with I Am the Book, compiled by Lee Bennett Hopkins (ISBN 978-0-8234-2119-0).

DIAMOND WILLOW - Helen Frost



1. BIBLIOGRAPHY
Frost, Helen. 2008. Diamond Willow. New York: Frances Foster Books. ISBN 978-0-374-31776-8

2. PLOT SUMMARY
Diamond Willow is a novel in verse about Willow, a shy, twelve-year-old girl, who lives with her family in Alaska. Diamond Willow is like a diary of her hopes, fears, and love of mushing with her father’s sled dogs. Like many girls her age, she struggles with who she is and who she wants to be, yearning for both acceptance and independence. Finally, her parents allow her to mush the dogs out to her grandparents’ house alone. And so begins her journey, one filled with beauty, tragedy, and surprising realizations about herself.

3. CRITICAL ANALYSIS
The title for Diamond Willow reflects not just the name of the main character, but the phenomenon where certain varieties of willow will develop a diamond-shaped mark with a dark center under their bark when a branch is removed. In the Author’s Note, Frost describes her own diamond willow lamp and walking stick, whose photo appears as a decorative element in the book. These objects were the spark for this story, which is told through a series of vignettes typeset in diamonds. Words near the center are set in bold, and can be read for their own meaning, a subtext of what Willow has the most trouble confiding and will not say directly even here.

Willow’s story is told in first person present tense, so the reader experiences the story as Willow experiences it. Interspersed among the poems are prose interludes, which are the observations of animals who carry the souls of her ancestors (Willow’s mother’s family are Native Americans in the Athabascan tribe, as described in the Author’s Note and references in the text). As they watch over Willow, the animals share insights with the reader, so there are times when the reader knows more than Willow herself.

The diamond-shaped poems are free verse, having no meter or rhymes. They are written as prose, with line breaks to fit the visual pattern more than phrasing. As a story more than poems, language is more natural with very few poetic elements like alliteration or onomatopoeia. Frost does craft similes and metaphors between Willow and her natural world, in one case comparing nagging doubts to hawks ready to dive on a timid mouse. Frost’s descriptions allow the reader to make their own mental pictures of what is happening in the story. Her words are carefully chosen to convey the events and their impact concisely and in the voice of a twelve-year-old. Each scene fits in the bounds of one diamond figure, and they gain beauty through their form. Each diamond is unique, just as each event in our lives leaves a different impression on who we are.

Traveling with Willow on her inner and outer journeys will take the reader through a myriad of emotions: from self-consciousness and doubt to despair and shame, panic and desperation, all the way up through strength, devotion, and love. (I needed tissues!) The emotions flow naturally out of Willow’s own reactions, bringing the reader deeper into the story.

There are no illustrations in Diamond Willow, though the cover illustration gives clues to the story. Some are obvious from the beginning of the story, but there are meanings that only become apparent once the reader has reached the end.

Diamond Willow would be most appropriate for upper elementary and middle grade readers. With themes of self-discovery and perseverance through adversity, Diamond Willow will resonate with youth who may be dealing with similar feelings in their own lives. The story has a timeless quality to it, and doesn’t contain any popular culture references that would date it in the future.

4. REVIEW EXCERPT(S) AND AWARDS
Best Books For Middle And Junior High Readers: Grades 6-9 - Second Edition (2009)
Texas Lonestar Young Adult Reading List Nominee, 2009
CCBC Choices List, 2009
Bank Street’s Best Children's Book of the Year, 2009
Capitol Choices Noteworthy Titles for Children and Teens, 2009
Winner of the Lee Bennett Hopkins Poetry Award (Pennsylvania Center for the Book) and the Mitten Award (Michigan Library Association)
The Lion and the Unicorn Award for Excellence in North American Poetry Honor Book, 2009

Bulletin of the Center for Children’s Books:Frost has spun metaphoric gold out of an evocative natural landscape, and she knows just how to craft it into an elegant and moving story of a young girl’s deepening understanding of the relationships she shares with those around her.”
BookList: “Set in a remote part of Alaska, this story in easy-to-read verse blends exciting survival adventure with a contemporary girl’s discovery of family roots and secrets… The casual diamond shape of the poems reflects how precious jewels of wisdom can grow around painful scars.”
School Library Journal: “As she unravels the truth, Willow comes to understand the diamonds and scars that bind her family together. She also gains awareness of her own strength and place in her community…Frost casts a subtle spell through innovative storytelling. Her poems offer pensive imagery and glimpses of character, and strong emotion. This complex and elegant novel will resonate with readers who savor powerful drama and multifaceted characters.”
School Library Media Activities: “The imagery of the poetry is powerful. Readers will be intrigued by the form of the storytelling and cheer for the strong and independent Willow who is well on her way to discovering who she is.”

5. CONNECTIONS
-          Give a book talk about the plot of Diamond Willow, ending by reading the first couple of poems out loud. Then, use a document camera to show the students what the pages look like.
-          Read an interview with Helen Frost at http://www.helenfrost.net/item.php?postid=23
-          Learn more about dog sleds and the Iditarod. Here are two websites mentioned on Helen Frost’s website:
-          Find out more about the Athabascan Native Americans
-          Explore diamond willow photographs. Many are available online; teachers could select appropriate websites prior to showing to classes.
-          Ask students to write poems in a diamond shape with hidden messages as in the format of Diamond Willow. Poems could be about family, friends, beloved pets, or challenges. Allow students to write on a topic that is not sensitive or embarrassing.
-          Ask students to write poetry in other natural shapes that have meaning to them, like spiraling shells or clouds. For more inspiration, check out:
Joyce Sidman, Joyce, and Krommes, Beth. Swirl by Swirl: Spirals in Nature. ISBN 978-0547315836)
Yolen, Jane. Shape Me a Rhyme: Natures Forms in Poetry. ISBN 978-1590784501